Manage: Refined Final Idea and Breakdown of Final Idea

Refined Final Idea and Breakdown of Final Idea

From the Feedback I managed to gather, it seemed apparent that with the most votes and the most positive feedback, that I should choose Idea #1 of my chosen ideas which was:

A 2D Animation about  A boy who finds himself in a troubled life but with the aid of a mysterious, mythical bird, he travels on an adventure that he never saw coming.  


Right from the start, this was the idea I wanted to pursue for my 2D Animation and during the feedback process, I'm glad most people enjoyed it with 14 votes out of the total 25 people I asked to vote and some giving me general quotations I jotted down and used as responses.


Since the feedback process, I have been thinking about how to refine this idea in order to produce it as my Final Idea and this is the summary of my 2D animation which I've titled "Heaven's Blue". In this Summary document, it details the Idea in a very detailed, refined manner, given moments in the story and animation that were not mentioned in the feedback process as, if they were, it would making voting and getting that feedback a lot harder and tedious for the people I'm asking feedback from. It I was to break down the Final Idea, without going into too much detail..


Heaven's Blue is a boy who is suffering from depression from every day life and just like any ordinary day, he walks to catch the bus to take him to school but on his travels he finds a small white bird follow him and ultimately distract him. The small white bird gets him in a lot of trouble, especially at school and with his parents but the bird tries his best to feed him friendship by giving him gifts but it doesn't go to plan. It isn't until Jacob, the young boy, realises what he has said and upset the bird that he goes out to venture for him. As he stays at a cliff side, the small white bird finds him but instead of being small, he has now transformed into a large, mysterious beast. The larger-than-life bird takes Jacob on an adventure across the world, sightseeing but he has to leave a very important message but ascending to the skies of Heaven once again, only this time, for Jacob's Life eternity. 


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