Just like my First Draft, my Second Draft had me asking various people including my peers, my tutor and more for Feedback. I did the same exact process I did for my First Draft of my Artefact for my Extended Project and also broke it down into the same three areas which were: Positives, Negatives and What to Do Next Time. This is my last passage of feedback before my final idea and this was the results broken down into those three areas from the extensive information I managed to recieve:
Positives:
+ Animation is more detailed
+ The animation is longer and more exciting
+ There isn't an excessive amount of effects or fades used
+ It feels more like an animation as the boxes have been removed which would be more favourable in a comic book
Negatives:
-Still a lack of sound or music
-The emotional might seem a bit smooth but it seems shaky as the sketches are quite low quality
-Lack of colour takes you out of the environment
-The animation seems to change from being quite serious to something rather comedic at the end
-Lack of consistently
What to Do Next Time:
It seems that what I need to do for my final draft is produce a lot of the elements I was meant to produce for this draft after getting the feedback from the first draft. Which would be adding the use of sound and music, it seems to be a key competent and not only that but colour seems to play a big part so I'll have to see what I can do and hone my skills and make something that I'm proud of and what people will enjoy but still holds my intention of being an emotional animation. I might have to simplify the idea or use a different program so that will be something I'll do for my final draft since I'm getting less of a result with the more time I take.
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